The Life Of A Teenage Princess was written by Rhyan.
Summary: This story was about a teenage princess who finds out she is a princess when she was 5 because she asks why people are always taking pictures of her and her parents finally decided to tell her.
Then is goes to her being a teenager and she has a boyfriend. Her boyfriend asks her to marry him but she says no because they are only 17, but she keeps it as a promise ring.
The princess is a cheerleader and they go to nationals with asll her friends and the one person she needed the most. Her boyfriend comes and surprises her.
Then at the end the boyfriend asks her to marry her(again)and she says yes.
Plot: The plot is the life of a teenage princess. Also, her and her team go to nationals.
Setting: The setting is at school around summer time.
Conflict: The convflict of the story would be between 3 girls. One girl tells this other girl that she is fat and shou8ldn't be on the team so that girl quits. The the princess goes to teh girl that quit and said "just ignore her and forget what she said because you're not fat and come back on the team", so she does. Then the princess talks to the other girl that was being rude and said she was off teh team because she can't treat people like that and tell her lies. After the princess realized that she needed her so she begged her to come back on the team and she does.
My Opinion: I thought this story kept my interest. There was some conflict, then it got figured out. Also the cheerleading team went to nationals and won, so they wee so proud and everyone else was when they got back.
However, I didn't really understand some parts of the story. One part was if her boyfriend actually cheated on her or not, it didn't really say. Otherwise, I thought it was a good story and well planned out.
My Overall Rating: My overall rate would be a 4 maybe a 3.5. The only reason I rate it that out of 5 is because I couldn't understand some of the story.
It was a good story and I hope she keeps up teh good story writing.
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